英语四级翻译习题与译文
1.第2句中的定语“距离教煌东南方向25公里处鸣沙山的”较长,故将其处理成后置定语按英文的表达习惯,把相关性强的词语放一起,故将“鸣沙山”后置于cliff,但如果把on amount called Mingsha 直接置于 on a cliff后,则读起来不顺秘,故把on a mount called Mingsha置于句末。
2.第3句中的“现存735个洞窟,壁画4万5千多平方米”如果译为there now exist..., and...,则句型结构是松散,宜将其处理成伴随状语,用 with more than 45,000 square meters of frescoes in 735 caves 来表达,更能体现出壁画和洞窟的关系。
3.翻译倒数第2句“教煌壁脚中的舞蹈人物是全人类的一颗璀璨的宝石”时,先译出主要结构(dancing imagesare a jewel),“敦煌壁画中的”作主语的后置定语,用in Dunhuang frescoes来表达,“全人类的” 作宾语的后置定语,译作for all human beings。
4.最后一句中的“被列人世界遗产名录”可译为was listed on the World Heritage List。但这种译法会产生两个list,根据英语避免重复用间的表达习惯,宜直接套用介词短语on the list来表达。
Dunhuang Mogao Caves are located in western China's Gansu Province. These caves were cut a cliff 25 kilometers southeast to Dunhuang, on a mount called Mingsha. Dunhuang Mogao Caves are regarded the biggest and the longest preserved Buddhist art treasures, with more than 46,000 square meters of frescoes in 735 caves. Dunhuang frescoes display Buddha's images and behaviour, and the relationship between Buddha and men. Dancing images in Dunhuang frescoes are a brilliant jewel for all human beings. Dunhuang Mogao Caves was on the World Heritage List in 1987.
唐三彩(Tricolor-glazed Pottery of the Tang Dynasty)是一种著名陶瓷(pottery)。它的诞生可以追溯到唐朝以前。“三彩”是多彩的意思,并不是只有三种颜色。唐三彩吸取了中国国画和雕塑(sculpture)的技巧,成为 一种风格独犄的艺术品。它以造型生动、色彩丰寓而著称。唐代是一个繁荣昌盛的时代,唐三彩就盛行于此时。 在那时唐三彩不仅在国内风行一时,而且还闻名于海外。
1.第2句中的“追溯到……”用动词词组date back to来表达,该词组用主动语态,后接名词或名词短语。如果用traceback to,则用被动语态。“唐朝以前”应理解为“唐朝以前的时期”,故翻译时要采取“增译”法,表 达为 the time beforethe Tang Dynasty。
2.第4句中的定语“中国国画和雕塑的”较长,故将其处理成后置定语,用介词短语of Chinese painting and sculpture来表达。仔细分析后发现,“成为一种风格独特的艺术品”表结果,故用不定式to form a unique style ofarts来表达,作结果状语。
3.倒数第2句“唐代是一个繁荣昌盛的时代,唐三彩就盛行于此时”如果逐字对译为the Tang Dynasty was atime of prosperity, and the pottery was popular at this time 则显得生硬、冗长。这里“此时”指的就是唐代,可用when引导时间状语从句,将两分句结合起来使句子结构更紧凑。
4.最后一句可套用not only... but also句型;“在国内”和“于海外”作状语置句末,分别用at home和abroad来表达。
Tricolor-glazed Pottery of the Tang Dynasty is a kindof famous pottery. Its birth could date back to thetime before the Tang Dynasty. "Tricolor" means a lotof colors rather than just three colors. The potteryabsorbed the techniques of Chinese painting andsculpture to form a unique style of arts. It isknown for its vivid figures and rich colors. The Tang Dynasty was a time of prosperity whenthe pottery was prevailing. At that time, tricolor-glazed pottery of the Tang Dynasty was notonly popular at home, but also well-known abroad.