四级冲刺班内部笔记写作热点话题及逻辑结构
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英语四级作文
Paragraph 1: (1) 概括性的引出要评论的事物或观点(general);
(2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点(或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。
Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象货问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句;
(2) 支持性的细节分论点(至少两点);
(3) 本段总结(可以省略)。
Paragraph 3: (1) 总结全文，定下结论(通常为我的对策或看法)。
四级作文试题2000年1月
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多多种途径解决。
2. 哪种途径适合我(说明理由)。
How I Finance My College Education
How I Finance My College Education
第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点：
Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.
第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱
第二段主题句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.
第二段分写：
In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.
In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.
What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.
第三段：我所赞同的方法(阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法)。
Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.
For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.
For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.
In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.
Therefore /So /Hence,.....
使文章富有表现力的手段：
1、使用有难度的词汇;
2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子;
3、使用被动语态;
4、使用倒装句;(not only... but also...;only...)
5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。
绿化我们的城市
第一段：
近年来，随着工商业的迅猛发展，许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐，但是，认识到绿化城市也同样重要。
句型变化
A. (1) We can imagine the beautiful surroundings. (2) There are many trees along the streets. (3) There is a clean river in the city. (4) There are many fishes in the river. (5) There are willow trees on the one side. (6) There are some pieces of grassland on the other side. (7) There are many flowers on them.
B. (1) Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we have made our cities greener. (2) Green trees line the streets. (3) A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound. (4) On the one side stand rows of willow trees. (5) On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.
1. There be...
1) a. There are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films.
b. Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.
2) a. There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages.
b. Housing shortages become the source of great complaint.
2. If
1) a. If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference.
b. Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.
2) a. If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good result.
b. The application of book knowledge alone will not bring you good result.
3) a. If there is no pollution, man can certainly survive.
b. Man can certainly survive in the world where there is no pollution.
3. In order to
1) a. In order to prevent the problem becoming too serious to solve, we must take an immediate step.
b. An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.
2) a. In order to build a stable and prosperous nation, people should make new efforts.
b. New efforts will bring ...
4. More and more
1) a. More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV.
b. People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.
2) a. More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle.
b. The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle.
3) a. More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.
b. Teenage smoking is on the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline in recent years.
4) a. More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy.
b. There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.
5) a. More and more trees have disappeared in the city.
b. There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city.
社会热点话题
写作练习：Jobs for Graduates
1) 大学生难找工作
2) 原因很多
3) 解决的办法
With the fantastic development of modern society, people in ever increasing numbers have access to tertiary education (高等教育). As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.
范文23：Nowadays, college graduates come to realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job. Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.
The job market for college students/ graduates is getting tighter and tighter. According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the class of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000. Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs?
第二段细节论证
分析原因：
1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be stressed/ emphasized/ mentioned...
2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to ...
3、The increase/ change/ failure/ success in ... mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors ...
Several years ago, many students were enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand. Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ less developed country. Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as ...
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个人接受教育
(2) 具体描述这个事物或者观点(或者是我对这个现象/ 事物的基本看法specific)。
Paragraph 2: (1) 作者对该现象货问题的基本看法，即文章的论点句;
(2) 支持性的细节分论点(至少两点);
(3) 本段总结(可以省略)。
Paragraph 3: (1) 总结全文，定下结论(通常为我的对策或看法)。
四级作文试题2000年1月
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance my College Education. You should write at least 100 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 上大学的费用(tuition and fees)可以通过多多种途径解决。
2. 哪种途径适合我(说明理由)。
How I Finance My College Education
How I Finance My College Education
第一段：首先，应该是用一种描述性的语言引出讨论的重点：
Nowadays/ At present/ Currently/ These days/ Today, tuitions and fees for college students are 【more expensive】 much higher than ever before. How to finance my college education has become a matter of concern.
第二段：有多种的方法，例如：1.向父母; 2.银行贷款 3.打工挣钱
第二段主题句：There are many ways to support my college education financially./ Ways to support my university study financially vary greatly/ are various.
第二段分写：
In the first place, I can get/ gain/ obtain all the money from my parents.
In the second place, I can apply for/ ask for a bank loan, especially set up/ established for college students/ undergraduates.
What’s more, I can find a part time job to earn enough money.
第三段：我所赞同的方法(阐述原因，为何不选其他的方法)。
Personally/ As far as I’m concerned/ In my opinion/ From my point of view/ To my way of thinking/ As I see it, I prefer the bank loan for the following reasons.
For one thing, my parents are not rich enough to afford me.
For another, I will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing my part-time/ temporary/ odd jobs.
In addition, I believe I can hunt a rewarding/ dream job after graduation, and then I will be able to pay off/ pay back/ return/ give back.
Therefore /So /Hence,.....
使文章富有表现力的手段：
1、使用有难度的词汇;
2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子;
3、使用被动语态;
4、使用倒装句;(not only... but also...;only...)
5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。
绿化我们的城市
第一段：
近年来，随着工商业的迅猛发展，许多大城市中树木的数量大幅度降低。人们作出各种努力防止树木被砍伐，但是，认识到绿化城市也同样重要。
句型变化
A. (1) We can imagine the beautiful surroundings. (2) There are many trees along the streets. (3) There is a clean river in the city. (4) There are many fishes in the river. (5) There are willow trees on the one side. (6) There are some pieces of grassland on the other side. (7) There are many flowers on them.
B. (1) Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we have made our cities greener. (2) Green trees line the streets. (3) A clean river winds through the city, in which a lot of fishes abound. (4) On the one side stand rows of willow trees. (5) On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.
1. There be...
1) a. There are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films.
b. Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.
2) a. There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages.
b. Housing shortages become the source of great complaint.
2. If
1) a. If you compare the two methods carefully, you will find the difference.
b. Careful comparison of the two methods will show you the difference.
2) a. If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good result.
b. The application of book knowledge alone will not bring you good result.
3) a. If there is no pollution, man can certainly survive.
b. Man can certainly survive in the world where there is no pollution.
3. In order to
1) a. In order to prevent the problem becoming too serious to solve, we must take an immediate step.
b. An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.
2) a. In order to build a stable and prosperous nation, people should make new efforts.
b. New efforts will bring ...
4. More and more
1) a. More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV.
b. People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV.
2) a. More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle.
b. The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle.
3) a. More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years.
b. Teenage smoking is on the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline in recent years.
4) a. More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy.
b. There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy.
5) a. More and more trees have disappeared in the city.
b. There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city.
社会热点话题
写作练习：Jobs for Graduates
1) 大学生难找工作
2) 原因很多
3) 解决的办法
With the fantastic development of modern society, people in ever increasing numbers have access to tertiary education (高等教育). As a result, job-hunting is now becoming headache for most graduates.
范文23：Nowadays, college graduates come to realize that it is not easy to get a rewarding job. Most/ Many of them can not get a job right after graduation.
The job market for college students/ graduates is getting tighter and tighter. According to a survey, only 80% of college graduates of the class of 2002 found jobs the year they graduated, compared with 95% in 2000. Why do college graduates find it increasingly difficult to get jobs?
第二段细节论证
分析原因：
1、Among the most convincing/ important reasons given/ cited/ offered/ identified by people for this problem/ phenomenon, one should be stressed/ emphasized/ mentioned...
2、One may regard/ see/ view/ think of the trend/ increase/ phenomenon as a sign of/ result of/ response to/ reaction to ...
3、The increase/ change/ failure/ success in ... mainly/ largely/ partly results from/ arises from is due to/ owing to/ attributable to the fact that/ several factors ...
Several years ago, many students were enrolled in/ admitted to/ taken in/ matriculated popular major, so that the supply is superior to/ outweigh/ exceeds the demand. Many graduates are reluctant to work in the remote areas/ western provinces/ developing areas/ less developed country. Graduates without working experiences are now losing their appeal for many international cooperations, such as ...
国家制定法律法规
个人接受教育