英语四级作文:人与电脑

　　此外，我们一定要认真审题，题干里要求要对图片作简要的描述，这点很多同学很容易忽略掉，会按话题作文来完成。这里就是阅卷老师扣分的点。然后第二段从反面展开分析为什么电脑会给人带来不好的影响。在行文时，要注意文章的层次和逻辑梳理。

　　【参考范文】

　　As is clearly depicted from a series of cartoons that a man is excessively dependent onthe computer whether in working and playing or at home and sleeping. The impact of thecomputer on daily life is such seriousness that it is high time we paid attention to it.

　　In the first place, due to the wide application of the computer, some people called netfriends always take priority over our family and friends in real life. The bulk of each dayincluding our time and energy is spent on the Internet. What’s more, the Internet deprives usof the delight in communication with others. When taking to someone by us, we can heartheir voices, see their expressions, and even hold their hands if we would like to. Last but notleast, the computer will lead to a decline of our skills of face-to-face communication. Thus wemay feel embarrassed and find it harder to communicate with people around us.

　　To sum up, we shouldn’t be dependent on the computer excessively. No matter howconvenient and speedy it is, we should remember the advantage of face-to-facecommunication.

　　【亮点表达】

　　1. 如图清晰的描述了：As is clearly depicted...

　　2. 一系列图画：a series of / a set of

　　3. 过分地依赖于：be excessively dependent on ...

　　4. 无论...还是....：whether ...or ...

　　5. 电脑对日常生活产生的影响：the impact of the computer on daily life

　　6. 如此....以致于...：such... That...

　　7. 该到了干...的时候了：it is high time ...

　　1. 首先....其次...最后：In the first place/what’s more/last but not least

　　2. 由于：due to...

　　3. 优于...胜于...：take priority over...

　　4. 每天的大部时间：the bulk of each day

　　5. 剥夺了某人关于....：deprive sb of sth

　　6. 与他人沟通：communication with...

　　7. 面对面的沟通：face-to-face communication

　　8. 感觉到很尴尬：feel embarrassed

　　1.总结：to sum up

　　2.无论多么的方便与快捷：no matter how convenient and speedy

　　3.学习任何知识需要日积月累，对于一门英语这门语言来讲更是如此，以上亮点表达希望各位考生朋友能够熟记在心。