英语四级写作范文附分析
Write a composition entitled What Do Students Need English for. You should write at least120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
下图是对不同专业学生使用英语的不同目的所作的调查结果,请描述并分析此图。
写作步骤构思:
步骤1:
审题:这是一篇以英语学习为主题的解释形图表作文。
步骤2:
引入话题:提出问题,为什么要学习英语
展开话题:解释图标中表现的问题
话题结论:应当加强英语教学
What Do student need english for
Today, it seems that everyone is studing English,especially students. But what do studentsstudy English for? A survey made by a teacher at a university gives us some hints.
现在,似乎大家都在学习英语,尤其是学生。但是,学生为什么要学习英语呢?一位大学老师做的一项调查为我们提供了一些线索。
The results of the survey suggest that students need English for diffrent purposes.Moststudents learn English because they need to read English textbooks or journals or attendEnglish lectures, while only a few students use it to talk to English-speaking visitors, attendseminars, and write letters, etc. There are a1so some differences between economics studentsand engineering students. Compared with engineering students economics students need toread English business textbooks and write reports in English.
调查结果表明,学生需要英语用于不同的目的。大多数学生学习英语,是因为他们需要阅读英文教科书或期刊或参加英语讲座,而只有少数学生会用它和说英语的游客交谈,参加研讨会、写信等。经济学专业的学生和工程专业的学生之间也有一些不同。与工程专业的学生相比,经济学专业的学生需要阅读商务英语教材和用英语写报告。
From tbe results of the survey, we can see that the purposes students learn English for varywith the academic field students study in. Whatever the purposes are,one thing iscertain:Students need English, and English teaching should be strengthened in universities.(149 words)
从调查的结果,我们可以看到,学生学习英语的目的随着所在的学术领域不同而不同。但无论目的是什么,有一点是肯定的:学生需要英语,大学应当加强英语教学。
The results of the survey suggest that students need English for different purposes.
调查结果表明,学生需要英语用语不同的目的。
点评:这是一个有that引导的宾语从句,that引导的从句做suggest的宾语,suggest在本句的意思是表明,要注意其当建议解释时引导从句的区别。
hint [hint] n.暗示,提示,线索
seminar ['semɪnɑː] n.研究会,专门讨论会
vary with 随……而变化
academic field 学术领域
one thing is certain 有一点是肯定的
strengthen ['streŋθ(ə)n] v加强,增强