四级写作预测范文
1. 许多人建议大学开设心理课程
2. 我对这一问题的看法
作文范文:
Recently more and more educator and common citizens suggest that universities collegesopen more courses which are helpful for students' psychological health. Personally, I fullyagree with their proposal for the following reasons.
On the one hand, the ever-increasing pressure of study at the moment and job-hunting inthe future may lead to many psychological problems such as anxiety, depression and evendespair, and the psychological courses open a door for communication and relaxation. Onthe other hand, such courses can teach students how to regulate feelings and emotions underdifferent situations, which is a good preparation for the future life in the complex socialnetwork. Finally, these courses also introduce good habits which are conducive to mental andpsychological health. To be mature and qualified citizens in the society, students have to domore than study hard.
In a word, I warmly welcome the establishment of psychological courses in universities. Inmy mind, they are good for students' psychological development.
点评:
首段提出主题,其中第二句为过渡句,引出下文;第二段提出三点同意的理由;最后一段得出结论,与第一段首句呼应,其中第二句是解释型的补充说明句。
范文首段提出许多人建议大学开设心理课程。作者同意这一建议,并分三点在第二段中叙述理由。首先,目前的学习以及将来的就业压力需要开设心理课程。其次,教会学生如何调整在不同环境下的情绪。最后,给学生介绍有利于其身心健康的好习惯。第三段总结呼应首段内容。
第二段第一点中的ever-increasing表示“一直在增加的”,修饰两个名词词组,对比鲜明,at themoment表示“现在”,in the future表示“将来”,open a door for…表示“开启了……之门”;第二点中的regulate表示“调节,控制”;第三点中的conducive表示“有益于……的”,后接介词to。
四级写作预测范文2:
My View on Double BA Degree
1. 现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见
2. 我对这一现象的看法
作文范文:
Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majorsat the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graduate from theuniversity several years later.
Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that thispractice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworkingand efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees athand after graduation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fiercecompetition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees arebecoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and finda satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.
Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusionthat it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, butalso prepares them for the coming competition.
点评:
首段直接点题,说明现象;第二段分述三个优点,其中首句为让步状语从句,意思是“虽然可能带来负面的后果,但总体上是有益的”;第三段呼应第二段,得出结论。
范文首段提出大学生读双学位这一普遍现象;第二段分三点进行论述,其中前两点是优点,即学生会更加勤奋,并且有利于他们在激烈的求职市场中找到工作,最后一点是解释可能带来的学费问题并不严重;第三段下结论,呼应第二段。
第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示“大有希望”;第三段末句中的compel sb.to dosth.表示“迫使某人做某事”。
四级写作预测范文3:
Shopping through Media
1. 目前许多人通过媒体购物
2. 媒体购物有利有弊
3. 我的看法
作文范文:
Shopping through Media
With the development of science and technology, it is much more common for people tobuy goods through different kinds of media than before. People can buy things such ascomputers and necklaces through TV, radio, the Internet, etc.
Shopping through media is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From theperspective of consumers, it can save time for people who don’t have much spare time. Forretailers, it can cut costs for those without much circulating funds. However, there are stillsome defects in shopping through media. First, compared with face-to-face deal, it seems lessreliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargaining.
In my view, although shopping via media brings great convenience to us, we still should bebrings great convenience to us, we still should be careful when we “go shopping” throughmedia. We should check the information released by the media. Only in this way can we fullyenjoy the convenience brought by media shopping without the concern of being cheated.