英语四级写作范文：假冒伪劣产品的危害
Write a composition entitled Harm of Fake Commodities. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品;
2.举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害;
3.消除伪劣商品的方法。
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写作步骤：
步骤1：
审题：这是一篇以假冒伪劣商品为主题的解释说明文。
步骤2：
引入话题：简述目前社会上假冒伪劣商品猖狂这一现象;
展开话题：详述假冒伪劣商品对消费者和社会的危害，并举例说明;
话题结论：从两个方面阐述消除伪劣商品的方法。
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写作范文：
Harm of Fake Commodities
One negative aspect of China's rapid economic development is the phenomenon of fake commodities. It is reported that these commodities range from foodstuff, clothes to radios, and TV sets and even ,medicines.
中国经济迅速发展产生的一个消极影响就是假冒伪劣商品的出现。据报道，从食品、服装业到收音机和电视机甚至药品都充斥着假冒伪劣商品。
Fake commodities are harmful in many ways. They have caused great loss and damage to consumers as well as to the society. For example，if someone buys some fake medicines，they may not cure hirn but may probably make his illness worse or even put an end to his life. Besides, fake commodities may cause people to lose trust in manufacturers who produce the real products by making the consumers suspicious of these products，thus leading to social problems.
假冒伪劣商品存在很多危害。他们对消费者和社会都造成巨大的损失和伤害。例如，如果有人买了一些假药，它可能不但无法治愈他反而使他的病情恶化，甚至导致他的生命走向终结。此外，假冒商品还可能使得消费者对这些产品产生怀疑，从而导致人们对生产真正产品的生产商失去信任，继而引发社会问题。
It is high time to take actions to get rid of fake commodities. First，the government should perfect relevant laws conceming the manufacture and sake of commodities. Second, people should be advised how to tell the genuine commodities from the fake ones, and be encouraged to report to the relevant authorities in case they have bought fake commodities.(169 words)
现在是时候采取行动来消除假冒伪劣商品了。首先，政府应完善与商品的生产和销售有关的法律。第二，应该告知人们如何分辨假冒伪劣商品， 并鼓励人们在购买到假冒伪劣商品时上报到相关部门。
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句型解析：
Besides, fake commodities may cause people to lose trust in manufacturers who produce the real products by making the consumers suspicious of these products，thus leading to social problems. 此外，假冒商品还可能使得消费者对这些产品产生怀疑，从而导致人们对生产真正产品的生产商失去信任，继而引发社会问题。
点评：这个句子比较长，但结构比较简单，这句话主句是"fake commodities may cause people to lose trust in manufacturers, thus leading to social problems" who引导的从句作定语修饰manufacturers。
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加分词：
range from…to… 从……到……范围
take action 采取行动
foodstuff ['fu:dstʌf] n.食品
get rid of 摆脱， 除去
put an end to 结束，终止
relevant ['reləvənt] adj.有关的，相关的
manufacturer [,mænju'fæktʃərər] n.制造商
genuine ['dʒenjuin] adj.真正的，真实的
suspicious [sə'spifəs] adj.可疑的，怀疑的
be encouraged to 被鼓励去……