英语四级写作范文：社会信任的缺失
Write a composition entitled Loss of Social Trust. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.社会信任危机日益严重;
2.社会信任缺失带来的后果，怎样解决这一问题;
3.做出总结。
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写作步骤：
步骤1：
审题：这是一篇以社会信任缺失为主题的解释说明文。
步骤2：
引入话题：指出社会信任缺失这一现象;
展开话题：从三个方面阐述社会信任缺失带来的后果;从三方面叙述解决这一问题的办法;
话题结论：找到满意的解决方法很重要。
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写作范文：
Loss of Social Trust
With the development of national economy, a worrying social problem also arises——people can trust each other less and less, especially strangers.
随着国民经济的发展，一个令人担忧的问题也同时产生了:人们对彼此的信任越来越少，尤其是对陌生人。
This phenomenon will bring many unfavorable consequences. First and foremost, people's life will lose a lot of fun since they become cautious all the time. What makes matters worse, the general expense of doing things rises abruptly as a result of the fact that people don't want to help strangers. FinaUy, if this matter is not properly settled, it will pose a threat to national education.
这一现象会带来许多不好的结果。首先，人们的生活会缺失掉许多乐趣，因为他们变得一直很谨慎。更糟糕的是，由于人们不想帮助陌生人，做事的总体成本突然地上升了。最后，如果这一问题得不到合理解决，会对国民教育造成危害。
It is high time that we called on the efforts from all sides to deal with this problem properly. For one thing, the government should make all efforts to create a harmonious social atmosphere. For another, teachers should seize every chance to stimulate affection and unselfishness in the hearts of the students. FinaUy, the mass media should also play a positive role in restoring mutual trust.
我们早就应该号召四面八方的努力，来正确地解决这一问题。一方面，政府应该通过各方努力来创造一种和谐的社会氛围。另一方面，老师们应抓住每个机会来激发学生心中的感情和慷慨。最后，大众媒体也应该在恢复相互间的信任上发挥积极的作用。
No matter whether this problem is a natural result of social development, it is important that we find a satisfactory solution to it in this social transformation era. (181 words)
不管这一问题是否是社会发展的必然结果，在这个社会转型的时代，我们找到一个满意的解决方法很重要。
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句型解析：
…the general expense of doing things rises abruptly as a result of the fact that people don't want to help strangers. ……由于人们不想帮助陌生人，做事的总体成本突然地上升了。
点评：这句话不是很长，但句子结构却比较复杂。首先这是一个因果状语从句，主句是the general expense rises，as a result of及其后面的部分作句子的原因状语;其次，在原因状语中，还有一个由that引导的同位语从句作fact的同位语。
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加分词：
cautious ['kɔ:ʃəs] adj.谨慎的，小心的
abruptly [ə'brʌptli] adv.突然地， 意外地
pose [pouz] v.造成，引起
stimulate [,stimjuleit] v.剌激;鼓励
affection [ə'fekʃn] n.感情
unselfishness [ʌn'selfiʃnəs] n.不自私，慷慨
play a positive role in 发挥积极作用
restore [ri'stɔ:r] v.恢复，修复
transformation era 转型阶段