英语四级写作范文：学生的兼职工作

　　Write a composition entitled Students' Part-time Jobs. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.

　　1.大学生出去做兼职有好处，也有弊端;

　　2.你的观点。

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　　写作步骤构思：

　　步骤1：

　　审题：这是一篇以大学生兼职为主题的解释说明文。

　　步骤2：

　　引入话题：介绍兼职的好处，并举例说明;

　　展开话题：指出兼职工作的缺点;

　　话题结论：提出自己的观点，兼职因人而异，需要把握平衡。

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　　写作范文：

　　Students' Part-time Jobs

　　学生的兼职工作

　　There are many advantages for a student to have a part time job. For instance, it helps him to realize that no success comes from nothing. It enables him to be independent and builds up his self-confidence. Therefore, part-time jobs cans get the students out of the ivory tower and give them the opportunity to know more of himself and of his personal value in society.

　　对于学生而言，兼职工作有很多好处。例如，它能够使学生认识到，没有付出就没有收获。这使他能够独立，树立自信心。因此，兼职工作能够让学生们走出象牙塔，使他们有机会更多地了解自己及个人在社会中的价值。

　　As everything has two sides, the disadvantages can't be ignored. First, part-time jobs sborten students' study time. Second, some even become so preoccupied with making money that they can't focus their attention on studying. In the end, the students may fal1 behind or fail in their studies.

　　由于事物都具有两面性，兼职工作的缺点亦不容忽视。首先，兼职工作缩短了学生的学习时间。其次，一些学生全身心投人到赚钱当中，这样便无法将注意力集中在学习上。最后，学生可能会落后他人，甚至荒废学业。

　　Personally, I believe students can choose to take up a job according to their own situation. The most important thing is for him to keep a good balance, put his study on top of the list and assign an adequate amount of time to it.(158 words)

　　就个人而言，我相信学生可按自身条件决定是否选择兼职。最重要的一点是，保持一种良好的平衡状态，将学业放在首位，安排足够的时间用于学习。

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　　句型解析：

　　For instance, it helps him to realize that no success comes from nothing. 例如，它能够使学生认识到，没有付出就没有收获。

　　点评：这是一个宾语从句，从句中活用了一个习惯说法“no success comes from nothing”，译为“没有付出就没有收获”。

　　Therefore, part-time jobs cans get the students out of the ivory tower and give them the opportunity to know more …… 因此，兼职工作能够让学生们走出象牙塔，使他们有机会更多地了解……

　　点评：这句话中活用了两个短语“get sb. out of”和“give sb. the opportunity”，这两个短语首字母发音相同，给人一种节奏感和音韵美。

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　　加分词：

　　independent [,indi'pendənt] adj.独立的，自立的

　　build up 构建，建立，树立

　　the ivory tower 象牙塔

　　become preoccupied with 全神贯注

　　fall behind 落后

　　take up 开始从事