英语四级写作范文：大学生的心理问题
Write a composition entitled Psychological Problems of University Students. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.大学生的心理问题现在越来越普遍;
2.造成大学生心理出现问题的原因有哪些;
3.你有什么建议。
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写作步骤构思：
步骤1：
审题：这是一篇以大学生的心理问题为主题的议论文。
步骤2：
引入话题：大学生心理问题很普遍，所以大学需要充分重视;
展开话题：引起这种现象的原因有很多方面;
话题结论：提出自己的建议和想法。
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写作范文：
Psychological Problems of University Students
大学生的心理问题
Nowadays, psychological problems are becoming more and more common among the university students. It is high time the schools and the whole society paid their full attention to the psychological health ofthe university students.
如今，心理问题在大学生当中越来越普遍。是时候学校和整个社会应该重视大学生的心理健康问题了。
There are many reasons for this phenomenon. Some students are tortured by not getting along well with classmates or roommates, more than too often they tend to settle the misunderstandings over violence, or choose to hide their emotions, which always lead to more scrious psychological problems. Being frustrated in love can make students think of extreme ways of ending their misery, taking revenge or committing suicide might happen in that case. Poverty can deprive a student's confidence, making them feel inferior compared to their peers. And pressure from the study and the job-hunting competition are also contributors to all kinds of psychological problems.
心理问题这种现象出现的原因有很多。有些学生因与同学或室友相处不好而备受折磨，他们往往倾向于用暴力来解决这些误解，要不就情愿隐藏自己的情感，这又总是导致更严重的心理问题。恋爱受挫可使学生想起用极端的办法来结束自己的痛苦，在这种情况下就可能发生报复或自杀。贫困可能使学生失去信心，使他们在同伴面前感到自卑。来自学习和求职竞争的压力也是各种心理问题的起因。
As a college student myself, I think we should try to be strong and reasonable enough to face the new challenges in our new life, and I sincerely recommend the schools to offer more psychological instructions.(173 words)
作为一名大学生，面对新生活的挑战，我认为我们应该尽量做到坚强和理性。我诚心地建议学校提供更多的心理指导。
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句型解析：
Some students are tortured by not getting along well with classmates or roommates, more than too often they tend to settle the misunderstandings over violence, or choose to hide their emotions, which always lead to more scrious psychological problems. 有些学生因与同学或室友相处不好而备受折磨，他们往往倾向于用暴力来解决这些误解，要不就情愿隐藏自己的情感，这又总是导致更严重的心理问题。
点评：本句详细阐述了学生和同学或室友相处不好的情况下会出现的情形，本句用了两个并列的动词短语列出学生所采用的常见解决方法，含有一个which引导的非限制性定语从句。
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加分词：
psychological [,saikə'la:dʒikl] adj.心理(学)的
revenge [ri'vendʒ] n.报仇，报复
pay one's full attention to 充分注意……
deprive [di'praiv] v.(of)剥夺，使丧失
phenomenon [fə'na:minən] n.现象
inferior [in'firiər] adj.较低的，次等的
torture ['tɔ:rtʃər] v.折磨，使痛苦
competition [,ka:mpə'tiʃn] n.竞争，比赛
violence ['vaiələns] n.暴力，暴行
contributor [kən'tribjətər] n.贡献者，捐助者
be frustrated in 在……方面失败
recommend [,rekə'mend] vt.建议，劝告