英语四级写作范文:社会责任
Write a composition entitled Social Responsibility. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.大学生参加社区服务、暑期志愿者服务、援助西部等是否能培养大学生的社会责任感;
2.人们对此观点不一,有的支持,有的反对;
3.谈谈你的看法。
写作步骤构思:
步骤1:
审题:这是一篇以大学生的社会责任感为主题的议论文。
步骤2:
引入话题:指出大学生参加各种活动能否培养社会责任感,人们对此有不同的看法;
展开话题:从三方面阐述自己的观点;
话题结论:总结自己的观点。
写作范文:
Social Responsibility
社会责任
Now many college students enthusiastically participate in community service, volunteer work and the westem aid service. There has been a discussion recently about whether this kind of action is helpful for cultivating the social responsibility of college students. People have different opinions about it. Some are in favor of it, while some take an opposite side.
如今许多大学生很有激情地参加社会服务、志愿者工作和西部支援服务。最近,人们已经在讨论,这种行为对培养大学生的社会责任感是否有用。人们就这一问题有不同观点。有些人支持,也有些人站在反对立场上。
As for me, it is helpful for the growth of the students and the cultivation of social responsibility. In the first place, it helps students understand what the needs of the country are. In the second place, it offers students the opportunity to play their own roles in the society. Finally, it enables students to understand what social responsibility is by paying close attention to other people, our society and state.
对我来说,这种行为有助于学生的成长和社会责任感的培养。首先,它帮助学生理解国家需要什么。其次,这种行为为学生提供机会,来发挥他们自己在社会中的作用。最后,通过密切关注他人、社会和国家,这种行为能使学生理解什么是社会责任感。
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more students will actively participate in these meaningful activities.(148 words)
基于以上讨论,我很容易就能预测到,越来越多的学生会积极参与到这些有意义的活动中去。
句型解析:
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more students will actively participate in these meaningful activities. 基于以上讨论,我很容易就能预测到,越来越多的学生会积极参与到这些有意义的活动中去。
点评:这是一个宾语从句,that引导的从句作forecast的宾语。此外“based on the above discussions”表示“基于以上讨论”,这是四、六级写作中常用的套语。
加分词:
enthusiastically [in,θju:zi'æstrikli] adv.热心地;满腔热情地
take an opposite side 采取相反的一面
play one's own role in 在……上扮演自己的角色
cultivate ['kʌltiveit] v.培养
in favor of 支持,赞同
forecast ['fɔ:rkæst] v.预测,预言