英语六级写作积累练习：细节决定成败

　　首段：这类题目通常会给出一句名人名言，首段可以对此名人名言进行阐述，提出关注细节的重要性。

　　关键点：解释名人名言，提出文章中心。

　　中段：通过具体事例来论述细节的重要性。考生可以选择用两个正面例子来阐述，比如苹果公司对细节的关注造就了该公司的卓越;也可以采用一正例一反例的论述方式，反例可以举某个公司因对细节的疏忽而走向衰落的例子。

　　关键点：选择有说服力的论据来论证观点，事实论据更胜于讲道理。

　　末段：提出个人观点，说明细节的重要性，要获得成功，注重细节是必不可少的品质。

　　关键点：强调细节的重要性。

　　参考范文

　　Details Make a Difference

　　That details make a difference is an old saying known to people all over the world. Details are important to success in business and in every walk of life. Details can make the difference between two things that appear similar, but in reality are very different in quality.

　　There are several examples which can be cited to illustrate this concept. The first one is the Apple Corporation. The late CEO, Steve Jobs, was addicted to details. He could not stop pushing his staff to pursue perfection in design and production. Due to his focus on details, Apple made great success in the mobile field, producing products that were not only innovative, but also superior. Immediately, others copied these ideas, but they did not take the importance of details into account. Some manufacturers did not follow strict rules in their production and turned a blind eye to tiny problems.Their products looked similar to Apple’s, but closer inspection showed they were not as good. This is just one example that shows the importance of stressing details. Another example is the great masterpiece of Chinese paintings which consists of thousands of skills for mountains, figures or rivers. All of these need focus on details.

　　From my perspective, it is important to emphasize details in daily life and work. Success can only come by this kind of conscientiousness.