六级写作优秀范文讲解：爱情与学习

　　On the cont ra ry , students hold that it is natural for young people to fall in love on the campus because they meet every day and their everyday meeting produces romantic passion towards each other . T hey in sist that the campus is not the Ga rden of Eden and love is not the Forbidden Tree . They take for example some of their f riends who, falling in love , ar e studying harder and have made greater progress to please their boy/ girl friends .

　　In my opinion , both views a re lop-sided . If a student does not give himself/ herself away in love but takes it as a drive , love produces positive effect . But if he/ she indulges himself/ herself too deeply in love, then he/ she will be a devoted lover but a f rustr ated learne r .

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　　结构分析：

　　·Int roduction

　　* Two differ ent views

　　· Teache rs’argue

　　* Campus love — time and energy con suming

　　* Campus love — s hould be forbidden

　　· Students’argue

　　* Campus love — na tur al

　　* Campus love — promote lea rning

　　· Conclu sion

　　* Both views lop-sided

　　* Depending on how to deal with it

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　　内容分析：

　　本文是一篇议论文。引言部分开宗明义提出师生对这一话题的争议; 主体部分分别摆出两种不同论点和论证, 结尾部分是作者的态度, 不偏不倚地加以评论。本文的命题和写作是议论

　　文的常见模式。

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　　万能句型：

　　controversial a . 有争议的

　　tear . . . away from 使⋯⋯离弃

　　lag behind 落后于

　　univer sity authorities 校方

　　restore t raditional regulation 恢复传统校规

　　students’school year s 学生在学期间

　　romantic pas sion 浪漫的感情

　　Ga rden of Eden 伊甸园

　　Forbidden Tree 禁果

　　please v . 取悦于

　　lop-sided a . 片面的

　　drive n . 推动

　　indulge oneself in 沉缅于

　　devoted a . 忠实的

　　fru st ra ted a . 挫败的