英语六级写作范文精讲：自行车旅行

　　There ar e many ways of t raveling . People may t ravel by plane if they want to t ravel far and r each their destination in a shorter time . I t is the most comfor table but expensive way . Most people t ravel by t r ain because it is a less expensive way but the compar tments a re cramped and stuffy . Bus journey is a cheape r way but it is spent on nar row, bumpy roads which ar e crowded with t raffic . Trip s by ship may be the cheapest and most comfort able way but it takes too much time .

　　I like tr aveling by bike . I can set out when I like and stop when I like . I can go whereve r I like so that I can enjoy delightful spots ra rely visited by other t ravele rs . When I feel tired , I sit down by the bike and have a good r est . Besides , I can save much money for tickets and much time in waiting for the t rain or bus . I can cover more places by riding a bike than going on foot .

　　Traveling by bike is good to health . It is really a sor t of good exercise to st rengthen one’s muscles and to test one’s will . Moreover , it brings no pollution to the air . So it helps to clean the atmosphe re .

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　　结构分析：

　　·旅游的方式有多种

　　* Plane

　　* Train

　　* Bu s

　　* Ship

　　·我爱骑车出游

　　* Convenient

　　* Acces sible to any place

　　* Save money and time

　　·骑车出游有益健康

　　* St rengthen one’s will

　　* Test one’s will

　　* No pollution

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　　内容分析：

　　本文是一篇简单的议论文, 文中首先列举了多种交通工具并说明优缺点, 然后落实到作者自己的喜好———骑车出游, 接着说出喜好的理由。最后一段为总结。本文篇幅不长, 但层次清楚, 又很连贯, 每一段的第一句均为主题句, 段中意思统一, 不跑题。本文应是一篇四级作文。

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　　万能句型：

　　destination n . 目的地

　　compa rtment n . 车厢

　　cr amped and stuffy 拥挤

　　nar row, bumpy roads 狭窄而颠簸的路面

　　set out 出发

　　st rengthen one’s muscle and test one’s will 增强体魄锻炼意志