英语六级写作优秀范文精讲

　　With the hand s of the clock pointing at 7∶20 , the exciting scene happen s . Out of nowhere there ar e thousands of vehicles on the road , cars , motor -cycles , taxis , bu ses and bikes fly their way through st r eets and lanes , horning at each other and cursing the t raffic lights . T he re are also people, sma rtly dressed office ladies and gentlemen , uniformed workers , nurses , teacher s and students , rushing about , now and then anxiously glancing a t their watches and blaming everybody that block s the way . School childr en seem neve r to walk but run everywhe re like a swarm of bees . To the ru sh mas s nothing is more important than get ting in time to their destinations .

　　This is the met ropolitan rush hour . But about an hour later , the roads a re fr ee of heavy t raffic, people are seen walking slowly , vacant seats on the buses a re waiting for passengers . The mad rus h for the day is over , but it will be repeated at the same time the next day .

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　　结构分析：

　　·About the ear ly riser s

　　·About the commut ers and tr anspor tation

　　·Met ropolitan rush hour — repetition every day .

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　　内容分析：

　　本文是一篇描写文。作者以写实的手法描绘了都市交通高峰期的种种情况。由于我们大多生活在城市, 每天都会经历这样的场面, 因此在读本文时会有亲身的感受。全文以时间顺序来展开, 描写各种车辆、人流的繁忙景象, 最后以“这种景象会日复一日地继续”而结束全文。

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　　万能句型：

　　metropolitan rush hour 大都市的交通高峰

　　early birds = ear ly riser s

　　subway n . 地铁

　　ahead of 在⋯⋯之前

　　catch up on their sleep 补充睡眠

　　with the hand s of the clock pointing at 随 着时钟指向( 这是with + n . + -ing 的结构)

　　out of nowher e . . . 不知从哪⋯⋯

　　fly their way through st r eets and lanes 从大街小巷飞驰而出

　　horning at each othe r and cursing the tr affic lights 互相按喇叭催促并诅咒交通指示灯

　　uniformed workers 穿制服的工人

　　rus hing about 乱窜

　　now and then 不时

　　a swarm of bees 一群蜜蜂

　　destination n . 目的地

　　vacant seats 空位