天津高考英语作文范文分析

　　天津高考英语作文题目

　　天津高考英语作文范文

　　I wish all of you would vote for me! (高级句式，主从复合句)

　　Thank you!

　　天津高考英语作文分析

　　My name is Li Jin. I'm outgoing and get on well with my classmates and teachers. I amskillful in (词义使用错误，应该用skilled) organizing all kinds of activities. I'd like to run for thevice president of the English club in our school (词汇前后不一致，用university更好), I know as thevice president, I must do the following things for the club: I will try to make it known to everystudent and more students involved in the activities organized by the club. Also, to improveour English and get more students interested in English. I intend to hold (动词有误，应用organize，意为“组织”) some activities at university, like lectures and English parties andinter-university activities (与前文重复，应改为代词ones) such as English debate competitions andspeech contests. I hope all of you vote me (句式错误，hope后的宾语从句表示将来的动作，应用一般将来时态;表示“选举”时应用动词短语vote for).

　　Thank you!