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  Last week, a football match was held between Class One and Class Two. The players from both sides are all excellent football players (动词时态错误,应用一般过去时) , so the match went (词汇使用错误,此处用went on,意为“进行”) fiercely at first. At last the result was: the winner was Class Two, and we were the loser.

  We didn't win the match, but we didn't lose the heart (固定短语错误,表示“丧气”应用 lose heart) . On one hand, we think that friendship comes first, and match comes second. On the other hand, since we all tried our best, we had no regret. In our life we may meet many failures, as long as we try our best, there's no need to feel (非谓语动词错误,there is no need doing sth是固定句型) regret for these failures. What's more, we should analyze the reasons of (介词错误,应用for) failure to get success for the next time.

  In a word, success is important, so is failure, because it's the mother of success.

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