重庆高考英语作文范文点评

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　　I really hope my words will be taken seriously, and I'll appreciate it if you respond soon! (句式使用地道优美)

　　Thank you !

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

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　　I'm a student from Chongqing, China. I write (时态有误，应用现在进行时) this letter to you toreport you the emergent situation of the Chinese Yangtze finless porpoise. Because of thehuman beings' influence, the number of this precious species promptly dropped (时态错误，应用现在完成时) to less than l000.

　　As far as I know, your foundation can help those species that are at the edge of extinction, Iwrite (动词时态错误，应用现在进行时) this letter to you to ask for your generous donation toprotect (词性错误，to是介词，后跟名词、代词或动名词) this endangered species. If you'reconvenient (汉语式表达，正确句子应为if it's convenient to you), would you please come toChina and have a close observation of the poor porpoises and give us aid and direction toprevent them from dying out completely?

　　Thanks for reading my letter and I'll appreciate to hear from you soon.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua