福建高考英语作文范文点评

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　　From the picture we can see a family of three walk(补语使用错误，应该用walking) on a long redcarpet. The son who is the center of the picture, walks proudly (句式不完整，应为walks proudlyforward). His father bends forward to help him draw his jacket while his mother, who is in front,is rolling out the carpet, with sweat dropping down.The picture showed (动词时态错误，应用一般现在时) that children are the center of each family of each family. As it's said (句式错误，as引导定语从句时用作关系代词，在此处作从句的主语，it应去掉), they are the hope of the whole family.Parents arrange everything for them, even their future. As a result, children rely on theirparents and have no independent thoughts. I think this is a serious problem to our society.This would destroy the future generation. For a long run, our China will be in danger.