高考英语满分作文点评

　　高考英语满分作文(一)

　　3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消

　　2)此事已告知Susan

　　3) 尽快回电

　　注意：1. 词数100左右;

　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Mrs. Wilson,

　　I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　高考英语满分作文点评

　　本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。

　　高考英语满分作文(二)

　　【试题回放】2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

　　教育部倡导学生：

　　每天锻炼一小时

　　健康工作五十年

　　幸福生活一辈子

　　请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

　　注意：

　　1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

　　2、词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

　　3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

　　教育部——the Ministry of Education

　　Good afternoon, everyone,

　　The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

　　The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

　　In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

　　Thank you!

　　高考英语满分作文点评

　　本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

　　积累卡片

　　好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡

　　好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

　　教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。

　　评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。

　　2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records.

　　如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

　　评析：虚拟语气。

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