高考英语优秀作文名师点评

　　高考英语优秀作文(一)

　　2、提出你喜欢的栏目。

　　3、简要说明理由。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数100左右。

　　2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

　　3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　4. 参考栏目：栏目—column

　　Dear Mr. Green,

　　I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

　　Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

　　Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　高考英语优秀作文点评

　　这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省今年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。

　　比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。

　　高考英语优秀作文(二)

　　一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其 写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：

　　1.地点：距白山入口处500米;

　　2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;

　　3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);

　　4.游泳池：全天免费开放;

　　5.欢迎预定。

　　注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

　　500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

　　Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

　　高考英语优秀作文点评

　　本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

　　积累卡片英汉互译

　　好词　1. provide v.提供 2. convenience n.便利

　　好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

　　very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。

　　评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。

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