高考英语作文高分模板

　　高考英语作文高分模板一

　　1. 介绍购物情况

　　2. 反映存在问题

　　3. 提出解决方案

　　注意：

　　1. 词数100词左右

　　2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

　　3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词

　　可能用到的生词：投诉complaint n.

　　【优秀满分范文】

　　To whom it may concern,

　　I am one of your customers(顾客). I ordered(订购)a set of(一套) Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much to my disappointment, thebooks were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn. To makematters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.

　　I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every rightto ask you to deal with this problem. I hope that you either return my money ordeliver a new set of books to me. Besides, I’d like to be informed of theprocess of your dealing with my complaint.

　　Lookingforward to your reply.

　　Sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　高考英语作文高分模板二

　　下面是幅照片，表现了女儿为妈妈拿包的情景“to ease the pain in her back, I remove the heavy load from mom’s shoulder”

　　你短文应包括：1.描述照片的内容 2. 结合自身情况谈谈你的感想 3.举例说明你能为家长肩负做些什么

　　范文：

　　The burden of students has been a hot topic for many years, but the load of parents has received little attention ,especially from their own children .

　　The picture shows us a touching moment when a little comes to greet her working mother . Realizing that her mother must be very tired after a day’s work , the girl helped to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response , the mother kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.

　　All that reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But , totally engaged in studies , I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying is the only thing I could do in return .Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing , bedroom cleaning ,or at least prepare breakfast myself , so as to share mom’s daily burden. The picture convinces me that it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student”.

　　高考英语作文高分模板三

　　最近，李岳被评为你们班的“每周之星”，请你根据她的事迹(在上周六下午，不顾天气炎热，为班级选购歌咏比赛服装)，用英语写一篇短文 1.李岳的事迹及对同学的影响 2. 你的评论 参考词汇：singing contest . costume(服装)

　　范文： Star student of the week

　　Li yue has been awarded the title of “star student of the week” for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday , Li yue went downtown and walked from one store to another ,looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms , she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting . Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts , we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.

　　Li yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example for us . Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.